TSIS: PG. 114 #2

In my essay outlining the concepts that connect Diamond and Gladwell's theories together, I use mostly the common types of transitional phrases to go from paragraph to paragraph at the most. I use the terms, first, second, etc.. along with However and other phrases just like that. I do use repetition in my essay. Repetition is primarily used to state the ways in which their theories relate and what those theories are in actuality.